What do you usually do on weekends?/ Do you prefer relaxing weekends doing nothing or active ones an
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I usually go to cafe and enjoy coffee and dessert with my boyfriend or friends on sundays. Also we eat dinner together. And on Saturdays, I do my hobby all day. Especially I real a book, wright the book report and post that at my naver blog. / I prefer both of that. So on sundays, I do active ones and on saturdays, I do relaxed ones. I cannot spend my all time on doing any one thing. I have to do various things because that is my character! But my friends are good at spending their time at their bed. So when I say \'I cannot do nothing all day\', they are surprised. They say \'is it possibility??\'. But I like my character. That character made present me. Because I think time is gold, I have many experiences now.
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Hi Sally,
The weekend is a great time to spend a few moments planning your upcoming week. A little minute of planning can yield significant gains in productivity and reduced stress. The week feels a lot more manageable when you go into it with a plan because all you have to focus on is execution. Feeling well-rested also helps you stay motivated and helps you actually comprehend and understand what you are learning, instead of just memorizing for the exam. Giving yourself a three-day weekend more often encourages you to prioritize your mental health. ~ Teacher QUENNY
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I usually go to cafe and enjoy coffee and dessert with my boyfriend or friends on sundays.
>> I usually go to a café and enjoy coffee and dessert with my boyfriend or friends on Sundays.
Also we eat dinner together. And on Saturdays, I do my hobby all day.
>> And on Saturdays, I do my hobby all day and we also eat dinner together.
Especially I real a book, wright the book report and post that at my naver blog.
>> Especially, I read a book, wright the book report, and post that on my Naver blog.
I prefer both of that. So on sundays, I do active ones and on saturdays, I do relaxed ones.
>> I prefer both of them so on Sundays, I do active ones and on Saturdays, I do relax too.
I cannot spend my all time on doing any one thing.
>> I cannot spend my all-time on doing only one thing.
I have to do various things because that is my character! But my friends are good at spending their time at their bed.
>> I have to do various things because that is my character but my friends are good at spending their time in their bed.
So when I say \'I cannot do nothing all day\', they are surprised.
>>So when I say \'I can\'t do anything all day\" they are surprised.
They say \'is it possibility??\'. But I like my character.
>> They say \'is it possible??\' and I say that\'s my character and I like my character.
That character made present me. Because I think time is gold, I have many experiences now.
>> That character made me present because I think time is gold and I have lots of experiences now.
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I usually go to cafe and enjoy coffee and dessert with my boyfriend or friends on sundays. Also we eat dinner together. And on Saturdays, I do my hobby all day. Especially I real a book, wright the book report and post that at my naver blog. / I prefer both of that. So on sundays, I do active ones and on saturdays, I do relaxed ones. I cannot spend my all time on doing any one thing. I have to do various things because that is my character! But my friends are good at spending their time at their bed. So when I say \'I cannot do nothing all day\', they are surprised. They say \'is it possibility??\'. But I like my character. That character made present me. Because I think time is gold, I have many experiences now.
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