What do you usually do to treat yourself and be relaxed?
학생이 쓴 원문
Many people play sports game not only to exercise but also to escape from the daily routine and stressful life. Playing a sports game is fun and it contributes to relieving stress. Exercise is not only good for the body, it is good for the mind. So am I. I play tennis whenever I have free time. I’m a member of the community tennis club in my neighborhood and I usually go to the tennis court every weekend unless I have other particular things to do. I spend a few hours playing tennis typically from 7 am to 11 am when I get out. My wife is strongly against it because she is waiting for the weekend and wants to do other things together like traveling, hiking or going shopping. Even after hard working for last a couple of days, I feel relaxed, refreshed and recharged after playing tennis. When I play tennis, I can forget about things that are bothering me. It surely puts me in a better mood. Playing tennis is the best cure for my mental disorders.
강사 첨삭
A Marvelous Monday to you Sir [이름] ^-^
Thank you for making me smile today.
I am so excited to talk about a lot of things with you again.
I envy you. I think you\'re really good at playing tennis.
It\'s good to hear that you feel better after playing that sport.
I hope that you had an awesome time at work. See you in class!
Teacher Nina
Many people play sports game not only to exercise but also to escape from the daily routine and stressful life.
>> Many people play sports game not only to exercise but also to escape from their daily routine and stressful life.Playing a sports game is fun and it contributes to relieving stress.
>> Correct!
Exercise is not only good for the body, it is good for the mind.
>> Correct!
>> OR: Exercising is not only good for the body but also for the mind.
So am I.
>> Correct!
I play tennis whenever I have free time.
>> Correct!
I’m a member of the community tennis club in my neighborhood and I usually go to the tennis court every weekend unless I have other particular things to do.
>> Correct!
>> OR: I\'m a member of the community tennis club in my neighborhod and I usually go to the tennis court every weekend unless I have an important thing to do.
I spend a few hours playing tennis typically from 7 am to 11 am when I get out.
>> Correct!
My wife is strongly against it because she is waiting for the weekend and wants to do other things together like traveling, hiking or going shopping.
>> Correct!
Even after hard working for last a couple of days, I feel relaxed, refreshed and recharged after playing tennis.
>> Even after working hard for the last couple of days, I feel relaxed, refreshed and recharged after playing tennis.
>> OR: I feel rejuvenated after playing tennis.
When I play tennis, I can forget about things that are bothering me.
>> Correct!
It surely puts me in a better mood.
>> Correct!
Playing tennis is the best cure for my mental disorders.
>> Did you mean: Playing tennis is the best cure for my mental strain.
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