What do you usually do when riding a train, a subway, or a bus?
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I usually try to s[이름]p in transportation listening to music through air-pot, because I need to s[이름]p and s[이름]ping make faster the time.
>>I usually want s[이름]p on trasportation listening to music using my earpods because I need to s[이름]p while traveling. S[이름]ping makes me feel that time moves faster.
While I\'m riding a bus, I shouldn\'t do whatever except s[이름]ping and listening to music because I have car sickness.
>> While I am on a bus, I shouldn\'t do anything except s[이름]ping while listening to music because I have car sickness.
I usually close my eyes in a bus for I prevent it.
>>I usually close my eyes on a bus to avoid feeling nauseous.
But I don\'t have train sickness, so I can use smartphone while I\'m riding a subway or train.
>>On the other hand, I am fine riding trains, so I can use my phone while riding a subway or a train.
I do online shopping, I read a web-toon(online comic book), and I talk to my friends through Kakaotalk.
>>I do online shopping, read a web-toon, and chat with my friends on Kakaotalk.
I like to have new clothes, but buying the one is a troublesome work.
>>I like to have new clothes, but choosing the perfect one is troublesome.
Therefore, the time that I\'m riding is appropriate for shopping.
>>Therefore, I find time doing my shopping while riding a subway.
I love to read a web-toon, but I don\'t have enough time on weekdays.
>>I love to read web-toons, but I don\'t have enough time on weekdays.
Therefore, the time is great chance to do.
>>That\'s why it is a great opportunity to read while traveling.
In the other way, I solve some problem that it is annoying normally.
>>In addition, I solve some problems which are annoying.
Solving a problem spend my time very much. The riding time is same to waste.
>>Doing so needs much of my time. I feel that my time is wasted when I am riding and just sitting on a transport.
I can do the two acting at the same time, so I\'m less irritated.
>>I can do two things at the same time, so I fell less irritated.
Even so, I hope the riding time reduces.
>>Even so, I hope the time I travel will be lessened.
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