What do you usually do when the weather is bad?
학생이 쓴 원문
When the weather is bad, like heavy snow,heavy rain,snow storm or typhoon,
I usually stay home and listen to the weather forecast.
And then I watch the news on TV what is happening.
I think ,staying at home is the best to keep of safety.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] [이름]!
Let\'s keep our sentences direct and simple.
You chose your words carefully.
Now, we can focus on patterns.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
When the weather is bad, like heavy snow,heavy rain,snow storm or typhoon, I usually stay home and listen to the weather forecast.
>> When the weather is bad, like during heavy snow, heavy rain, a snowstorm, or a typhoon, I usually stay home and listen to the weather forecast.
And then I watch the news on TV what is happening.
And then I watch the news on TV what is happening.
>> Then, I watch the news on TV to see what is happening.
I think ,staying at home is the best to keep of safety.
I think ,staying at home is the best to keep of safety.
>> I think staying at home is the best way to stay safe.
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