what do you usually do when you dialed the wrong number?
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
I have no experance to dial the wrong number. As I talked to you about it, there is no dial phone these days. only click button of mobil phone, we can connect someone what I talk to.
Just before, I had a wrong number from a woman. she said I called her. so I said, you called me, I had no number like your number in my phone. but she said, because I called her, she called me. So I apologized her to dial the wrong number. so she disconnected on the line.
I check it out, but I never called her just before. I think, she called me for selling something, but I said, who were you? even if she want ,to talk something to me, I did not answer who she want to, oppositely, I requested her who you were repeatedly. so she could not say any more, so I think, it seemed she said to me the wrong calling.
강사 첨삭
Hi James. Thank you for doing your homework. You did great. Keep it up. See you later in class. - T. Jasper
Here are your corrections:
I have no experance to dial the wrong number. As I talked to you about it, there is no dial phone these days. only click button of mobil phone, we can connect someone what I talk to.
>> I never experienced dialing the wrong number. As I told you before, there are no dial phones nowadays. We click or press the screen of our mobile phones.
Just before, I had a wrong number from a woman. she said I called her. so I said, you called me, I had no number like your number in my phone. but she said, because I called her, she called me. So I apologized her to dial the wrong number. so she disconnected on the line.
>> Before, I had a wrong call from a woman. She said that I called her but I didn\'t so I said, you called me. Your number isn\'t saved in my phone. But she said I called that\'s why she called me. After that, I apologized for dialing the wrong number and then she disconnected.
>> I checked if I called her before but I never called her.
I think, she called me for selling something, but I said, who were you? even if she want ,to talk something to me, I did not answer who she want to, oppositely, I requested her who you were repeatedly. so she could not say any more, so I think, it seemed she said to me the wrong calling.
>> I think, she called me to sell something but when I answered the phone I immediately asked who she was even if she wanted to say something. She asked me who I was but I didn\'t answer her as well so I repeatedly asked here who she was until she couldn\'t say anything more and that was the time she told me that it was a wrong call.
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