What do you usually do when you get angry?

2018-09-12 · 첨삭 강사 Elisha

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i usually fall a sleep at that time. when i get a bad emotion, i spend lots of my mind at that times. it makes me tiring. so i go to sleep. sleeping lets me avoiding the situation. but i know that sleeping couldn't solve the problem. after sleeping, i can see the situation better than before!

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Hello, [이름]! Thank you for sending me your homework! See you! ~Teacher Elisha ^^

i usually fall a sleep at that time.

>>I usually fall asleep on that moment.
 when i get a bad emotion, i spend lots of my mind at that times.

>> When I feel bad, I spend a lot of time thinking.
 it makes me tiring. so i go to sleep.

>> It makes me tired that\'s why I go to sleep.
 sleeping lets me avoiding the situation.

>> Sleeping helps me avoid that situation.
 but i know that sleeping couldn\'t solve the problem.

>> I know that sleeping can\'t solve the problem.
 after sleeping, i can see the situation better than before! 

>> Upon waking up, I will be able to manage the situation better.

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