What do you usually do when you get angry?
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear teacher Sheila
Happy Friday!
Thank you for teaching me today.
Today\'s recommended song is \"Good bye\". It\'s a song by Jessica.
Homework: What do you usually do when you get angry?
When i got angry, I will do abdominal breathing. Because It\'s relax. Calm my self is very important.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Tony! Thank you for recommending another song for me.
I will listen to it tonight. :)
~Teacher Sheila
>>When I get angry, I will do abdominal breathing.
OR>>When I get angry, I usually do abdominal breathing.
Because It\'s relax.
>>Because it\'s relaxing.
Calm my self is very important.
>>Calming myself is very important.
OR>>To make myself calm is very important.
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