What do you usually do when you travel?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I travel a new place,I usually eat the local foods and go for a walk around.
I wake up late at a hotel and spend a relaxed time in a cozy cafe.
I visit the famous places and I experience the special nature and cultures.
I sometimes buy some local specialties or look around at the market.
However,if I join a group tour , I will be busy with sightseeing.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] [이름]!
This is a great way to end the week.
Hopefully, we can continue the same consistency for the next weeks to come.
Make sure to practice some more.^^
~~ Teacher sharon
When I travel a new place,I usually eat the local foods and go for a walk around.
>> When I travel to a new place, I usually eat local food and go for walks around the area.
I wake up late at a hotel and spend a relaxed time in a cozy cafe.
I wake up late at a hotel and spend a relaxed time in a cozy cafe.
>> I wake up late at the hotel and spend a relaxing time in a cozy cafe.
I visit the famous places and I experience the special nature and cultures.
I visit the famous places and I experience the special nature and cultures.
>> I visit famous places and experience the special nature and culture.
I sometimes buy some local specialties or look around at the market.
I sometimes buy some local specialties or look around at the market.
>> I sometimes buy some local specialties or look around the market.
However,if I join a group tour , I will be busy with sightseeing.
However,if I join a group tour , I will be busy with sightseeing.
>> However, if I join a group tour, I would be busy with sightseeing.
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