What do you usually do with your brothers for fun?
학생이 쓴 원문
My brothers live far away. So we don\'t get together so often. we just visit some siblings each other when they have somethings special such as wedding, birthday, sickness and vacation. I used to go fish with my brothers. we also went to hiking small mountain in front of our village. I usually hit the road with my husband instead of my brothers for fun.
강사 첨삭
Sounds like you are close with your siblings, Angel! I am happy for you! Just don\'t forget to capitalize the first letter of a sentence.-Faith-
My brothers live far away. So we don\'t get together so often. >> My brothers live far away, so we don\'t get together so often.
we just visit some siblings each other when they have somethings special such as wedding, birthday, sickness and vacation.
>> We just visit each other when we have some special events or emergencies such as wedding, birthday, vacation, and one\'s sickness.
I used to go fish with my brothers.
>> I used to go fishing with my brothers.
we also went to hiking small mountain in front of our village.
>> We also went hiking in a small mountain in front of our village.
I usually hit the road with my husband instead of my brothers for fun.
>> CORRECT
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