what do you usually do with your family?

2022-02-24 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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Because of Corona, everything changed, including everyday life. Before COVID 19 occurred, I often used to travel to many famous places with my family. Plus, while I ate meals and had coffee with my friend, I would chat all day with them. Nowadays, I just say hello to my friend by phone, and my family gathers at home and talks about work, health, faith, and human relations for a long time. Corona 19 is bad, but I think it is good to share more our heart each other because of COVID 19.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름] Ha!

Thank you for your efforts this week.

You are really trying hard to develop yourself.

I appreciate that so much.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

Because of Corona, everything changed, including everyday life.

>> Correct
Before COVID 19 occurred, I often used to travel to many famous places with my family.

>> Before COVID 19 occurred, I used to travel to many famous places with my family.
Plus, while I ate meals and had coffee with my friend, I would chat all day with them.

>> Plus, I also ate meals and had coffee with my friend and I would also chat with them all day.
Nowadays, I just say hello to my friend by phone, and my family gathers at home and talks about work, health, faith, and human relations for a long time.

>> Nowadays, I just say hello to my friend on the phone, and my family gathers at home and we talk about work, health, faith, and human relations for a long time.
Corona 19 is bad, but I think it is good to share more our heart each other because of COVID 19.

>> COVID 19 is bad, but I think it is good to share more of our hearts with each other because of COVID 19.

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