What do you usually do with your friends?

2021-04-07 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

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1. What do you usually do with your friends? We always have been talking about our health and care, when we meet. Sometimes we have played the billiard and used to drink alcohol together. 2. How are your friendships different now from when you were a child? I don`t know how to say that. but I think my friendships are not changed loving for my friends from when I was a child.

강사 첨삭

Hi Huje,
Thank you so much for your ideas today!
Have a fun and safe Wednesday!
Teacher Elly.
What do you usually do with your friends?
1. What do you usually do with your friends?
We always have been talking about our health and care, when we meet. 
>>We always talk about our health and how to take care of ourselves, when we meet. 
Sometimes we have played the billiard and used to drink
alcohol together.
>>Sometimes, we play billiard and drink
alcohol together.

2. How are your friendships different now from when you were a child?
I don`t know how to say that. but I think my friendships are not changed loving for my friends from when I was a child.
>>I don`t know how to say it. but I think my love for my friends have not changed from when I was a child.

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