What do you usually do with your friends?
학생이 쓴 원문
I usally play mobile games and watching movies together with my friends in my home.
But l don\'t have many friends near my house, so I\'m don\'t play with my friends often.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Jimmy!
Please find below your edited compostion. Also, take note of the corrected sentences. Speak to you tomorrow!
Cheers,
Jean~~
What do you usually do with your friends?
I usally play mobile games and watching movies together with my friends in my home.
>> I usually play mobile games and watch movies at home together with my friends.
But l don\'t have many friends near my house, so I\'m don\'t play with my friends often.
>> But I don\'t have many friends near my house so I don\'t play with them often.
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