What do you usually eat when: 1. You are happy? 2. You are frustrated?
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I usually eat in both situation, but it’s little different in each.
>> I usually eat in both situations with a different type of food.
When I and frustrated, I takeaway some food and eat it at my home alone.
>>When I am frustrated, I takeaway some food and eat it alone at home.
OR: Whenever I am frustrated, I takeaway some food and eat it by myself at home.
I chiefly eat some kind of dessert like scone and macaroon. Sweety food is very helpful to change feeling.
>> I mostly, eat some kind of desserts like scone and macaroon. Eating sweet foods help change one\'s feeling or mood.
Beside, when I and happy, I usually want to eat something with people.
>> On the other hand, when I am happy, I usually want to eat something with people.
So I search for someone who can eat with me.
>> So, I look for someone who can eat with me.
And then, we eat some food that can eat together like jeongol.
>> Then, we eat some food that can be eaten together like \"hotpot\".
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