What do you usually eat when: 1. You are happy? 2. You are frustrated?

2021-02-03 · 첨삭 강사 Aki

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I usually eat in both situation, but it’s little different in each. When I and frustrated, I takeaway some food and eat it at my home alone. I chiefly eat some kind of dessert like scone and macaroon. Sweety food is very helpful to change feeling. Beside, when I and happy, I usually want to eat something with people. So I search for someone who can eat with me. And then, we eat some food that can eat together like jeongol.

강사 첨삭

Hello again [이름], Great job for doing your  homework. Let\'s eat sometime if you would visit the Philippines. Haha! Just kidding :)

~Teacher Aki

I usually eat in both situation, but it’s little different in each.

>> I usually eat in both situations with a different type of food.

When I and frustrated, I takeaway some food and eat it at my home alone.

>>When I am frustrated, I takeaway some food and eat it alone at home.

OR:  Whenever I am frustrated, I takeaway some food and eat it by myself at home.

I chiefly eat some kind of dessert like scone and macaroon. Sweety food is very helpful to change feeling.

>> I mostly, eat some kind of desserts like scone and macaroon. Eating sweet foods help change one\'s feeling or mood.

Beside, when I and happy, I usually want to eat something with people.

>> On the other hand, when I am happy, I usually want to eat something with people.

So I search for someone who can eat with me. 

>> So, I look for someone who can eat with me.

And then, we eat some food that can eat together like jeongol.

>> Then, we eat some food that can be eaten together like \"hotpot\".

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