What do you usually enjoy doing during the cold season?

Hi [이름]!

Thank you for asking how I am. ^^

I had Acute Gastroenteritis last Thursday, which made me quite weak up until now.

But I feel a little better today  and I am strong enough to work.

I looked for your homework last Wednesday but I wasn\'t able to find a composition from you.

Also, I cannot see any attached file aside from the composition.

Please tell me more about this in class. ^^

I hope one day you and your whole family could go skiing again someday.

So you can reminisce all your memories. ^^

~~t. Ally

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In my late twenties and early thirties, I used to go skiing in the winter.

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 I used to spend weekend on skiing with my friends and sometimes with my girlfriend.

>> I used to spend my weekends on skiing with my friends and sometimes with my girlfriend.

Even though my girlfriend(the present wife) didn’t like skiing, she followed me.

>> Even though my girlfriend (who is now my wife) didn\'t like skiing, she went with me.

After married, we were pretty busy to have children and raise them.

>> After getting married, we became pretty busy with having and raising the children.

So we couldn’t enjoy the free time.

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Then my children became teenagers, I tried to go skiing with them.

>> When my children became teenagers, I tried to go skiing with them.

My son didn’t like skiing from the beginning.

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My daughter enjoyed skiing for the first few years, but she is not interested in it any longer.

>> My daughter enjoyed skiing for the first few years, but she is no longer interested.

They prefer playing games on the net or hangout with their friends to playing winter sports with me.

>> They prefer playing games on the internet or hanging out with their friends rather than playing winter sports with me.

That’s why I’m enjoying a winter sleep during the cold season.

>> That\'s why nowadays, I simply enjoy winter sleep during the cold season.