What do you usually like doing when you are in a park?
학생이 쓴 원문
I usually play soccer, eat lunch box or talk with my mom in the park.
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What do you usually like doing when you are in a park?
I usually play soccer, eat lunch box or talk with my mom in the park.
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*NOTE: I would like to hear more about it in detail. Maybe you can tell me how do you feel about being in the park and the like.
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