What do you usually look forward doing on weekends?
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First of all, I mostly want to get some rest on weekends. It would be a common dream for people work during a week. Watching a Netflix with laptop, lying on my bed is my favorite way to having a rest. l also look forward to have a bottle of wine with my wife at home. We like to have a conversation during having wine. Additionally my wife and I often go to cinema, department store, and the Starbuks on weekend. Among them, whenever we went to the Starbuks, we were always having a plan to study English, but just after 30mins we found out that we were chatting each other or doing some other things such as web surfing, watching some funny video clips on the phone. Anyway, it\'s Wendsday and I\'m already very exhausted, and I hope that God will take Thursday, and Friday away tonight. Thanks God.
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Hello George ,
Thank you for taking time to answer this question. It only proves that you really wanted to improve in your English skill. Keep up the good work!
Sincerely,
Teacher Annie (^^)
What do you usually look forward doing on weekends?
First of all, I mostly want to get some rest on weekends.
>>>First of all, I usually want to get a lot of rest on weekends.
It would be a common dream for people work during a week.
>>>CORRECT
Watching a Netflix with laptop, lying on my bed is my favorite way to having a rest.
>>>Watching Netflix on my laptop while lying on my bed is my favorite way of resting.
OR: Watching Netflix on my laptop while lying on my bed is my way of a perfect and relaxing weekend.
l also look forward to have a bottle of wine with my wife at home.
>>>I am always looking forward having a bottle of wine with my wife at home.
We like to have a conversation during having wine.
>>>We like having a conversation while drinking wine.
Additionally my wife and I often go to cinema, department store, and the Starbuks on weekend.
>>>In addition, my wife and I often goes to the cinema, department store and Starbucks on weekends.
Among them, whenever we went to the Starbuks, we were always having a plan to study English, but just after 30mins we found out that we were chatting each other or doing some other things such as web surfing, watching some funny video clips on the phone.
>>>Whenever we went to Starbucks, we always have this plan to study English but after 30 minutes we ended up doing other things. Like we usually chat about something, we surf the internet or we watch some funny videos on our smart phones.
Anyway, it\'s Wendsday and I\'m already very exhausted, and I hope that God will take Thursday, and Friday away tonight. Thanks God.
>>>Anyways, it\'s already Wednesday and I\'m already exhausted. I really hope that God will take Thursday and Friday away tonight. Thanks be to God!
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