What do you usually order in your favorite restaurant?
학생이 쓴 원문
First of all, My favorite food is Japanese food.
So, I go to a Japanese restaurant once a week. my best food is Ramen.
Ramen is very delicious and taste so clearly. and price is cheaper than other main dishs.
If i go to a Japanese restaurant with my visitors, I always eat sushi.
Sushi is main dish that combine rice and fish or egg or meat. It is so delicious but too expensive.
So i eat sushi once a month.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]! Thank you so much for doing your homework. You did a wonderful job. Please take note of the corrections I made on your sentences. Keep it up and see you in class! ^^
-T. Julia
First of all, My favorite food is Japanese food.
>> Correct
So, I go to a Japanese restaurant once a week.
>> Correct
my best food is Ramen.
>> My best food is Ramen.
Ramen is very delicious and taste so clearly. and price is cheaper than other main dishs.
>> Ramen is very delicious and has a clear taste, and the price is cheaper than other main dishes.
If I go to a Japanese restaurant with my visitors, I always eat sushi.
>> Correct
Sushi is main dish that combine rice and fish or egg or meat.
>> Sushi is a main dish that combines rice with fish, egg, or meat.
It is so delicious but too expensive.
>> Correct
So i eat sushi once a month.
>> Therefore, I eat sushi once a month.
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