What do you usually prepare during family gatherings? Why? Example: I usually buy a cake for the who
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Our family gathers on lunar new years day, Chuseok, grandparent\'s birthdays and my maternal grandfather\'s death day. On lunar new years day or Chuseok, I prepare Jeon, which is Korean pancake. I cook it in my faternal parent\'s house with my women relatives while my men relatives helping farming. On the other days, I prepare nothing.
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I feel nostalgic every time I read or hear that this kind of tradition still exists. I hope your generation will continue doing this and be passed on to younger generations. In my case, I enjoyed my childhood at big events like this, because my paternal grandfather would butcher his big pig and have it roasted. A memory that I love to remember.
Have a good day!
T. Aki~
Our family gathers on lunar new years day, Chuseok, grandparent\'s birthdays and my maternal grandfather\'s death day.
>>>Our family gathers on Lunar New Year\'s Day, Chuseok, grandparents\' birthdays, and my maternal grandfather\'s death anniversary.
On lunar new years day or Chuseok, I prepare Jeon, which is Korean pancake.
>>> On Lunar New Year\'s day or Chuseok, I prepare Jeon, which is a Korean pancake.
I cook it in my faternal parent\'s house with my women relatives while my men relatives helping farming.
>>>> I cook it in my paternal parent\'s house with my aunts while my uncles help in farming.
On the other days, I prepare nothing.
>>> CORRECT!
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