What do you usually wish for during your birthday?
학생이 쓴 원문
Actually, I don\'t wish anything during my birthday.
But I have to, I will wish something about me.
Because If it is Christmas or other big holiday, I will wish something for my family and friends, but it is my birthday so I wanna wish something about me.
And also if there are big events or very sad events, I will wish about them.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]:)
Wishing has already been a tradition whenever it\'s someone\'s birthday. It\'s actually fun.
Actually, I don\'t wish anything during my birthday.
>> Actually, I don\'t wish for anything on my birthday.
But I have to, I will wish something about me.
>> But if I have to, I will wish for something for myself.
Because If it is Christmas or other big holiday, I will wish something for my family and friends, but it is my birthday so I wanna wish something about me.
>> If it\'s an important holiday, I usually with something for my family and friends. But since it\'s my birthday, I will wish something for myself.
And also if there are big events or very sad events, I will wish about them
>> Also, if there were big or sad events, I will wish something regarding those.
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