What do you want most in a friend - someone who is intelligent, or someone who has a sense of humor,

2015-09-18 · 첨삭 강사 Charlie

학생이 쓴 원문

I prefer funny and reliable friend than other personality. Because I'm not a funny and talkative person, so I want my friend have a various episode to talk to me every time we meet. However if my friend lie to me just pretend to be a fun person, he/she might unable to be my friends. I think friends is the most reliable person that know all about me more than my parents. We usually talk our private things to close friend even we can't talk to our family. So friends must have to be reliable person. I don't want to leak my secret to other person. Fortunately my best friend is very reliable and positive person. So when I have a hard time, I always say it to her. These are the reasons why I want most in a friends someone who have a sense of humor and reliable personality.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! ^^ Happy Friday! I hope you have a good weekend. ~~ Good job on expressing your opinion in the composition topic. ^^ Most of the corrections made were to improve eloquence and let me share an important aspect in grammar: \"Speak/Talk to\" vs. \"Speak/Talk with\"\" Speak to\" being used when there is a monologue kind of a situation, A speaks and B listens. This has reference to instructing, reprimanding and situations like this. (e.g. My boss will speak to me about my mistake last week.) \"Speak with\" is a more neutral kind of a term implying a bidirectional communication where A and B both talk and listen to each other. (e.g They were talking with each other on the newest proposal)   All good things, ==Teacher Charlie==       I prefer funny and reliable friend than other personality. >> I prefer friends who are funny and reliable amongst other personality traits. Because I\'m not a funny and talkative person, so I want my friend have a various episode to talk to me every time we meet. >> Since I\'m neither funny nor talkative, I want a friend who could talk about entertaining topics with me everytime we meet.   However if my friend lie to me just pretend to be a fun person, he/she might unable to be my friends. I think friends is the most reliable person that know all about me more than my parents. >> However, if this friend bluffs and only pretends to be a fun person then I would have to reconsider our friendship. I think friends are the next most reliable people to know other than our parents.   We usually talk our private things to close friend even we can\'t talk to our family. So friends must have to be reliable person. I don\'t want to leak my secret to other person.>>  We usually talk about private things with close friends that we cannot share with our family so friends must be trustworthy. I don\'t want my secrets to be leaked to other people. Fortunately my best friend is very reliable and positive person. So when I have a hard time, I always say it to her. >> Fortunately, my best friend is a dependable and optimistic person. That is why when I\'m up to the hilt with difficulty, I always tell her. These are the reasons why I want most in a friends someone who have a sense of humor and reliable personality. >> These are the reasons why I want the most in a friend is a sense of humor and a reliable personality.

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