What do you want to be good at?
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to be good at math, science and music. It\'s because I am not good at math and science, so I always get low scores on the test. And in the music, I can\'t live without music, so I want to know about music more and more.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Daisy! Thank you so much for doing your homework. I appreciate it a lot. I know that you can do well in everything as long as you never give up. Keep up the good work and see you in class! ^^
T. Julia
I want to be good at math, science and music. It\'s because I am not good at math and science, so I always get low scores on the test.
>> I want to be good at math, science, and music because I struggle with math and science, resulting in consistently low test scores.
And in the music, I can\'t live without music, so I want to know about music more and more.
>> Correct
OR >> As for music, I\'m passionate about it, and I can\'t imagine my life without it. Therefore, I aspire to deepen my knowledge of music.
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