What do you want to do if you won the lottery?
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
What a wonderful my life!
I can\'t believe it that I won the lottery.
But, god helped me and I was a rich man.
I am going to buy a new car like a Benz and buy a new suit like a iron man.
I will give some money to my wife and parents.
I want to go to south pole and hope to meet a Panguin and I will invite to my teacher Tricia in Korea ^^and I will give the other money to poor people.
Thanks
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! :)
I can\'t believe it that I won the lottery.
I will give some money to my wife and parents.
I want to go to south pole and hope to meet a Panguin and I will invite to my teacher Tricia in Korea ^^and I will give the other money to poor people.
Thanks.
Thank you so much for answering your homework.
Have a wonderful day. :)
- Tricia
What a wonderful my life!
>> What a wonderful day that would be for my life.
I can\'t believe it that I won the lottery.
>> It would be difficult for me to believe that I won the lottery.
But, god helped me and I was a rich man.
>> But, God helped me and I will become a rich man.
I am going to buy a new car like a Benz and buy a new suit like a iron man.
>> I am going to buy a new car like a Mercedes Benz and buy a new suit like Iron Man\'s.
I will give some money to my wife and parents.
>> CORRECT!
I want to go to south pole and hope to meet a Panguin and I will invite to my teacher Tricia in Korea ^^and I will give the other money to poor people.
>> I want to go to the South Pole and hope to see a penguin and I will invite my teacher Tricia to Korea. I will also give some of the money to poor people.
Thanks.
>> CORRECT!
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