What do you want to do on your vacation? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to go to my grandmother\'s house.
Because their is two dog and good view.
I like it.
강사 첨삭
Hi Da [이름]~! ^^ Thanks for doing your homework! Keep writing and keep improving!
>> TEACHER GEMMA
I want to go to my grandmother\'s house.
>>> CORRECT~! ^^
Because their is two dog and good view.
Because their is two dog and good view.
>>> Because my grandmother has two dogs and her house scenery is really good.
I like it.
I like it.
>>> CORRECT~! ^^
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