What do you want to do this coming weekend?

2024-09-20 · 첨삭 강사 Don

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I want to play games with my family because my mom works for long time resently so I\\\'m boring. And my family always see a phone, So I\\\'m boring. So I want to play games with my family.

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Hi [이름]!

Keep up the good work in doing your homework!

I want to play games with my family because my mom works for long time resently so I\\\'m boring.
And my family always see a phone, So I\\\'m boring.
So I want to play games with my family.

>> I want to play games with my family because my mom works for a long time recently so I\'m bored.
My family always uses their phone,  we don\'t talk that much but I want to play games with my family.

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