What do you want to do when the weather is too hot.
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to swim in the pool because it is very cool.
And I want to eat ice-cream because it is very cool and sweet.
And I want to turn on the air conditioner and rest a moment because it is comfortable and cool.
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What do you want to do when the weather is too hot?
I want to swim in the pool because it is very cool.
>> OR: I want to swim in the pool to cool down.
And I want to eat ice-cream because it is very cool and sweet.
>> And I want to eat ice cream because it is cold and sweet.
And I want to turn on the air conditioner and rest a moment because it is comfortable and cool.
>> Also, I want to turn on the air conditioner and rest for a moment because it is comfortable and can help me cool down.
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