What do you want to do when you\'re given a chance to travel?
학생이 쓴 원문
If i have a chance to travel, i would like to stay more than a year in abroad and to learn english conversation from the local person until i can speak it fluently . I expect this day to be come with in a short time.
There are two reason that one is for my business another is to go abroad with my wife.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Ethan!
Thank you for submitting your answer to me.
Traveling abroad would definitely be a good choice to learn and practice the English language more and at the same time, learn or know a different culture from a different country. But most importantly, spending it with a loved one is really a great choice. ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> If I have a chance to travel, I would like to stay more than a year abroad and to learn English conversation from a local person until I can speak it fluently .
I expect this day to be come with in a short time.
>> I expect this day to come within a short time.
>> Or: I expect this day to be coming within a short time.
There are two reason that one is for my business another is to go abroad with my wife.
There are two reason that one is for my business another is to go abroad with my wife.
>> There are two reasons. One is for my business another is to go abroad with my wife.
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