What do you want to eat when you are celebrating? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to eat some steak at my celebration. I very much love a steak. So, I used to eat some steak on my birthday. But these days, we don\'t care about our family\'s celebrations. I think my older sister and me became grow-ups so our family is insensitive to the celebration.
강사 첨삭
Happy Friday Jay!]
You can still celebrate to enjoy your steak. hahaha.
I guess steak became part of most Korean celebrations.
Thank you for sharing. See you later in class!
T. Aki~
I want to eat some steak at my celebration.>>> CORRECT!
I very much love a steak.
>> I love steak very much.
>> I love eating steak very much
So, I used to eat some steak on my birthday.
>>> CORRECT!
But these days, we don\'t care about our family\'s celebrations.
>>> CORRECT!
I think my older sister and me became grow-ups so our family is insensitive to celebration.
>>> CORRECT!
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