What do you want to here most from a friend who is closing a conversation with you?

2021-04-26 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

학생이 쓴 원문

I want to hear these words. After talking with you, I helped me a lot, it was healing and relaxed, thanks for listening, it has been nice talking. I have a friend who asks me questions about teaching and parenting almost everyday. When myt friend closes the conversation, she always says \"thanks and call you again tomorrow\".

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름],
Thank you so much for today\'s ideas.
Have a nice day!
Teacher Elly.
What do you want to here most from a friend who is closing a conversation with you?
I want to hear these words.
CORRECT!
or>>I would like to hear these words.
After talking with you, I helped me a lot, 
>>After talking with you, it helped me a lot. 
it was healing and relaxed,
>>It healed and relaxed me.
Thanks for listening. 
CORRECT!
or>>Thank you for listening to me. 
it has been nice talking.
>>It has been nice talking with you.
I have a friend who asks me questions about teaching and parenting almost everyday.
CORRECT!
or>>I have a friend who keeps asking me about teaching and parenting almost everyday.
When my friend closes the conversation, she always says, \"thanks and call you again tomorrow\".
CORRECT!
or>>When my friend ends the conversation, she always says \"thanks and call you again tomorrow\".

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