What do you want to improve about your appearance?
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to improve the shape of face to look sharper than my rounded face shape because it causes ugly passport photos.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Judy!
Many of us want to look thin on our photos. Thus, there are ways to make it smaller through make up. Others go under the knife and have surgery. Nonetheless, looking better is a right. If we have the money and luxury of time, we can always make our looks better than it is now.
Thank you for this honest answer!
See you tonight!
-T. Donna =)
>> I want to improve the shape of my face to look sharper than my rounded face shape because it causes an ugly passport photos.
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