What do you want to include in your ideal fitness program?
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to include some physical activities like soccer, baseball, and basketball.
Those activities help me improve a body fitness and it is important to keep our body healthy.
Actually now, I don\'t enjoy activity that make me sweat like running.
So, I want to include some sports that include running to increase lung capacity and consume more calories.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
That is a good plan. I think adding sports to your fitness program would make it more fun and exciting. I hope you can give it a try one day!
Thank you for sharing!
~T. Roanne ^_^
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I want to include some physical activities like soccer, baseball, and basketball.
>> Correct!
Those activities help me improve a body fitness and it is important to keep our body healthy.
Those activities help me improve a body fitness and it is important to keep our body healthy.
>> Correct! Or Those activities help me improve my body fitness and it is important to keep our body healthy.
Actually now, I don\'t enjoy activity that make me sweat like running.
Actually now, I don\'t enjoy activity that make me sweat like running.
>> Actually, now, I don\'t enjoy activities that make me sweat like running.
So, I want to include some sports that include running to increase lung capacity and consume more calories.
So, I want to include some sports that include running to increase lung capacity and consume more calories.
>> Correct!
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