What do you want to include in your ideal fitness program?
학생이 쓴 원문
My ideal fitness program is to make a plan and to do it.
I think that have to exercise and eating protein regularly.
I need to control of food and you check your weight every day.
Then I think I can maintain the weight I want.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Julia!
Hank you for this! Gee, You are really an exercise enthusiast!
Enjoy learning English and please consider those corrected sentences as pat of your progress :) Have a nice day
Aki~
My ideal fitness program is to make a plan and to do it.
>>> My ideal fitness program is to make a plan and do it.
I think that have to exercise and eating protein regularly.
>>> I think that I have to exercise and eat protein regularly.
I need to control of food and you check your weight every day.
>>> I need to control my food intake and check my weight every day.
Then I think I can maintain the weight I want
>>> CORRECT!
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