What do you want to include in your ideal fitness program?
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As a pilot, driving a helicopter at the narrow station, It is necessory to enhance the flexibility of body. So when it comes to fitness program, I proper work out with my body rather than using machines, dumbells and stuffs like that. Getting help from those equipments could easily grow mucles. But It couldn\'t enhances someone\'s flexibility, make it worse in some cases. On the otherhand, using their own body to their fitness program could improve both mucles and flexibilty. Such as push-up, sit-up, and pull-up with a bar will help to get your body much better balanced.
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Happy Monday,
Hope you\'re doing great George. Thank you so much again for answering your homework regularly. I can really notice that you are really trying hard to say what is on your mind and that is a good attitude on learning a language. Keep it up George!
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Teacher Annie
HOMEWORK:
What do you want to include in your ideal fitness program?
As a pilot, driving a helicopter at the narrow station, It is necessory to enhance the flexibility of body.
>>> As a pilot, driving a helicopter at the narrow station is really hard because it\'s necessary to enhance the flexibility your body.
So when it comes to fitness program, I proper work out with my body rather than using machines, dumbells and stuffs like that.
>>> So when it comes to fitness program, I prefer working out with a proper workout just like doing sports rather than using machines in the gym like dumbbells and etc.
Getting help from those equipments could easily grow mucles.
>>> Using these equipment and machines in the gym could easily grow muscles.
But It couldn\'t enhances someone\'s flexibility, make it worse in some cases.
>>> But it couldn\'t enhance someone\'s flexibility and sometimes makes it worse in some cases because the muscles are made not in a natural way.
On the otherhand, using their own body to their fitness program could improve both mucles and flexibilty.
>>> On the other hand, using their own body to their fitness program could improve both their muscles and flexibility.
Such as push-up, sit-up, and pull-up with a bar will help to get your body much better balanced.
>>> Such as push-up, sit-up, and pull-up with a bar will help them to have a balanced body with real muscles not artificial.
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