What do you want to squeeze in your activities nowadays?
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to squeeze painting in my activities. After I retired, I really wanted to paint landscapes or flowers. But, I can’t paint right now because of n my neck disc. When my health improve, I will paint anytime.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Jane!
You are a very active and energetic person. I hope that your neck disk will be better and all the things that you want to pursue will be achievable.
Painting is a very relaxing hobby. Not only that it is creative, it also enhances our attention to details.
You did a wonderful job in putting all of your ideas in these sentences. Congratulations for composing all these correct sentences!
See you again in class.
-T. Donna~
>>Correct!
OR: I want to squeeze painting in my activities. After I retired, I really wanted to paint landscapes or flowers. But, I can’t paint right now because of my neck disc. When my health improve, I will paint anytime. Very good sentences!
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