What do you want, travlling alone or travlling with some one? why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I always travlling with my family or friend.
When 1month ago, I did volunteer alone in jeju island. so I stay guest house. In that place, I met some people and talk with them.
I like listening what their\'s various life.
I was interesting to met strange people.
So i want challenge one time travel alone.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Yu Min!
Thank you for submitting your composition to me.
I hope that you\'ll be able to travel again and meet new friends. ^^
Have a wonderful day!
~Teacher Gina
>> I\'m always traveling with my family or friend.
>> Or: I always travel with my family or friend.
When 1month ago, I did volunteer alone in jeju island. so I stay guest house.
When 1month ago, I did volunteer alone in jeju island. so I stay guest house.
>> One month ago, I did a volunteer work alone in Jeju Island so I stayed in a guest house.
In that place, I met some people and talk with them.
>> In that place, I met some people and talked with them.
I like listening what their\'s various life.
I like listening what their\'s various life.
>> I like listening about their various life stories.
I was interesting to met strange people.
I was interesting to met strange people.
>> I\'m interested to meet strangers.
So i want challenge one time travel alone.
>> So I want to challenge myself to travel alone one more time.
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