What do you wish you could bring home from the places you\'ve visited?
학생이 쓴 원문
I wanted to bring some fruits and foods to my home from a Bali, Indonesia.
I went to the Bali last year.
Bali\'s fruits has very good quality.
It\'s so sweet and juicy.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]. Thank you for this. I can see your improvement day by day. Keep practicing and see you in class! ^^
-T. Julia
I wanted to bring some fruits and foods to my home from a Bali, Indonesia.
>>I wanted to bring some fruits and food back to my home from Bali, Indonesia.
I went to the Bali last year.
>> Correct
Bali\'s fruits has very good quality.
>>The fruits in Bali have very good quality.
It\'s so sweet and juicy.
>> Correct
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