What does a good moive do to its viewers?
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The good movie do peoples makes make sad, laugh, scard or love.
The comady movie makes laugh.
And drama movies makes cry.
And also horror movies are makes scard.
And lastly a romantic movie is makes love.
These movies are the good movie makes peoples laugh, sad, scard and love.
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The good movie do peoples makes make sad, laugh, scard or love.
>> Good movies make people sad, laugh, scared, or feel love.
The comady movie makes laugh.
>> The comedy movies make us laugh.
And drama movies makes cry.
>> And dramatic movies make us cry.
And also horror movies are makes scard.
>> Horror movies make us feel scared.
And lastly a romantic movie is makes love.
>> And lastly, romantic movies make us feel love.
These movies are the good movie makes peoples laugh, sad, scard and love.
>> Good movies give people good emotions.
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