What does a healthy diet look like to you?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think the healthy diet is not to overdo.
Overdoing to exercise and to keep diet is rather aggravating our body.
So we should proper our body and not work too hard.
강사 첨삭
Hello Jenna! Thank you for answering the question honestly. I agree with you. Too much of everything is not good for us. We will talk about this in class. I will see you. Take care! ~ T. Lyn
I think the healthy diet is not to overdo.
>>I think it is not good to overdo having a healthy diet or to eat too much healthy food.
Overdoing to exercise and to keep diet is rather aggravating our body.
>>Excessive exercise and diet rather worsen our body.
So we should proper our body and not work too hard.
So we should proper our body and not work too hard.
>>Therefore, we much adjust our bodies properly and not work too hard.
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