What does a holiday mean to you?

2021-11-03 · 첨삭 강사 Maine

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Holiday have two means for me. One is resting. In some holidays of single day, I almost can rest on my way. Therefore, If I had many gathering in around days of holiday, I will want to rest alone. However, I usually love gathering someones, so on most of holidays, I have scheduled before some weeks. I\'m really lonely when I\'m alone and I have much energy. I usually miss my friends and relatives, so I want to meet them. Another mean is travel. In special day, I used to go to the unusual place. I love to go to the another city. Specially, on Christmas, I must date with my boyfriend in hot place. (It is most of Korean couple\'s rules.) But in last Christmas, we can\'t go anywhere because of the pendemic. And this Christmas, I maybe in Finland, so I can\'t meet my boyfriend. So I\'m sorry for him. I hope to go to the special place with my boyfriend in 2023 Christmas.

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Holiday have two means for me.

>>A holiday has two meaning for me.
One is resting.

>>One is taking some rest.

In some holidays of single day, I almost can rest on my way.

>> In some holidays, I can almost take some rest all day.
 Therefore, If I had many gathering in around days of holiday, I will want to rest alone.

>>Therefore, if I have many gatherings to attend to on holidays, I will choose to rest at home instead.
 However, I usually love gathering someones, so on most of holidays, I have scheduled before some weeks.

>>However, I usually love gatherings, so I make schedules before the holiday comes.
 I\'m really lonely when I\'m alone and I have much energy.

>>I feel lonely when I am alone and I need to regain my energy with activities.
 I usually miss my friends and relatives, so I want to meet them.

>>Correct.
 Another mean is travel.

>>Another meaning of holiday for me is traveling.
 In special day, I used to go to the unusual place.

>>On a special day, I go to an unusual place
 I love to go to the another city.

>>I love going to another city.
 Specially, on Christmas, I must date with my boyfriend in hot place. (It is most of Korean couple\'s rules.)

>>Particularly on Christmas, I should be with my boyfriend in a nice place.
 But in last Christmas, we can\'t go anywhere because of the pendemic.

>>But last Christmas, we could not go anywhere because of the pandemic.
 And this Christmas, I maybe in Finland, so I can\'t meet my boyfriend.

>>So this year,  I might be in Finland, so I can\'t be with my boyfriend on that day.
 So I\'m sorry for him.

>>So I feel sorry for him.

I hope to go to the special place with my boyfriend in 2023 Christmas.

>>I hope to go on a trip with my boyfriend on Christmas of 2023.

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