What does a holiday mean to you?
학생이 쓴 원문
A holiday means an opportunity to rest for me. We can recharge our energy by taking a rest. And it gives us energy to live our daily lives. Rest is essential for human life. That is why national holidays should be increased. lol
Thank you, sir!
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름] U!
Thank you too!
I wish you all the best in your English language learning!
Have a wonderful time at your university! ^^
-T.Jhozel
A holiday means an opportunity to rest for me.
>> Correct!
OR: For me, a holiday means time to relax.
OR: For me, a holiday means time to relax.
We can recharge our energy by taking a rest.
>> Correct!
And it gives us energy to live our daily lives.
>> Correct
OR: And it gives us the energy we need to go about our daily lives.
OR: And it gives us the energy we need to go about our daily lives.
Rest is essential for human life.
>> Correct!
That is why national holidays should be increased. lol
>> Correct!
OR: That is why the number of national holidays should be increased.
OR: That is why the number of national holidays should be increased.
Thank you, sir!
>> Correct!
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