What does a holiday mean to you?
학생이 쓴 원문
Holiday is important for me.
I feel tired every single day. so I want to rest.
Holiday can satisfy my desire of rest.
강사 첨삭
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~~Teacher Ryka^^
Holiday is important for me.
Holidays are important to me.
I feel tired every single day. so I want to rest.
>> CORRECT
OR >> I feel exhausted every day, so I need some rest.
Holiday can satisfy my desire of rest.
>> A holiday can fulfill my desire for rest.
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