What does a person\'s age tell us? What do we know about a sixty-year-old that\'s different from a t
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I think a person\'s age is just a number. There are very wise people even they are not that old and contrary there are some people who is not respectable even they are old. So, I believe there\'s nothing that age can tell us. Also, I want to be wise person while getting older.
We know that sixty-year-old person has experienced more than thirty-year-old person and that maybe could make the former more wiser and respectable man than the later. I think that\'s all that we can know about them.
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I think a person\'s age is just a number.
>> CORRECT!
OR>> I think age is just a number, as the saying goes.
There are very wise people even they are not that old and contrary there are some people who is not respectable even they are old.
>> There are very wise people even they are not that old and contrary there are some people who are not respectable even they are old.
So, I believe there\'s nothing that age can tell us.
>> CORRECT!
Also, I want to be wise person while getting older.
>> Also, I want to be a wise person while getting older.
We know that sixty-year-old person has experienced more than thirty-year-old person and that maybe could make the former more wiser and respectable man than the later.
>> We know that a sixty-year-old person has more experience than a thirty-year-old and that maybe could make the former a wiser and respectable man than the later.
I think that\'s all that we can know about them.
>> CORRECT!
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