What does art mean to you personally?
학생이 쓴 원문
when I was in high school to prepare for college.
And Entering the college, I fell in love with art and design.
Art makes my life more colorful and meaningful.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for doing your homework, [이름]! It sounds like your journey from high school to college brought you to a passion for art and design! It\'s wonderful how art can enrich our lives in such meaningful ways.
~Kelly^^
when I was in high school to prepare for college.
>> When I was in high school, I prepared for college.
And Entering the college, I fell in love with art and design.
>> Upon entering college, I fell in love with art and design.
Art makes my life more colorful and meaningful.
>> Correct
OR:
>>Art adds vibrancy and purpose to my life.
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