What does being \"rich\" or \"wealthy\" mean to you personally? How do you define financial success?
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I think if a person has a house in Seoul and assets worth about 2 billion won, I can be considered rich.
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I love your perspective! Having a house in Seoul and significant assets definitely reflects financial stability and wealth. It\'s fascinating how various regions and values influence our understanding of what it means to be rich. I also dream of owning a home here in my city and having a comfortable amount of savings in my account. These aspirations drive me to work hard and pursue my goals!
~Kelly^^
I think if a person has a house in Seoul and assets worth about 2 billion won, I can be considered rich.
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