What does having a pet teach children?
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Children do Raising a pet is making friends.
Playing with pet children feel pleasure and patience.
I don\'t raise a pet but I think like that.
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What does having a pet teach children?
Children do Raising a pet is making friends.
>> Children who raise pets can make friends.
Playing with pet children feel pleasure and patience.
>> Children feel pleasure and patience when they play with pets.
I don\'t raise a pet but I think like that.
>> OR: I don\'t raise a pet but that\'s what I think.
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