What does “inner beauty” mean to you? Do you consider artificial beauty (cosmetic surgery) to still

2023-05-12 · 첨삭 강사 Irene

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What does “inner beauty” mean to you? Do you consider artificial beauty (cosmetic surgery) to still be beauty? Why/why not? 1.The inner beauty means inner healthy to me. The Inner beauty is not only positive thinking but also overdo it negative situations. 2.Yes, I do. I want to cosmetic surgery sometimes. maybe I\'ll do cosmetic surgery if I\'m keep feeling that dissatisfaction of my face. But I\'m not consider deeply. If I want to cosmetic surgery or If they want to cosmetic surgery just do it. I\'m not satisfaction of my whole face, almost I like my face. so I don\'t care about that deeply. hehe.. Always thank you teacher ;)

강사 첨삭

Good evening Sona. Thanks for sharing your thoughts about this topic. ^_^

T. Irene

>>> Inner beauty means inner health to me. It is not only about positive thinking but also overcoming negative situations.
2.Yes, I do. I want to cosmetic surgery sometimes. maybe I\'ll do cosmetic surgery if I\'m keep feeling that dissatisfaction of my face.

>>> Yes, I do. Sometimes, I also think of undergoing cosmetic surgery. Maybe, I will consider that when I\'m dissatisfied with my face.
But I\'m not consider deeply. If I want to cosmetic surgery or If they want to cosmetic surgery just do it.

>>> But I\'m not really serious about it. If people want cosmetic surgery, they can just have it.
I\'m not satisfaction of my whole face, almost I like my face. so I don\'t care about that deeply.

>>> I may not be fully satisfied with my face but I haven\'t thought about cosmetic surgery yet.

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