what does it mean to get older?
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t have any special feelings for getting one year older.
I just feel the responsibility of my life.
What can I say?
It is important what to do and how to live.
There is a saying in our proverb.
\"The nobler, the humbler.\"(The more ripe the rice, the more bow the head.)
The advantage of getting older is getting more wisdom and love.
The disadvantage of getting older is that many illnesses occur to our body.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] Ha!
It\'s good to start this year right.
I hope we can put in more effort in our studies.
I know that we have come a long way but there is always room for improvement.
Good luck this year!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I don\'t have any special feelings for getting one year older.
>> I don\'t have any special feelings toward getting one year older.
I just feel the responsibility of my life.
I just feel the responsibility of my life.
>> Correct
What can I say?
What can I say?
>> Correct
It is important what to do and how to live.
It is important what to do and how to live.
>> Correct
There is a saying.
There is a saying.
>> Correct
\"The nobler, the humbler.\"(The more ripe the rice, the more bow the head.)
\"The nobler, the humbler.\"(The more ripe the rice, the more bow the head.)
>> Correct
The advantage of getting older is getting more wisdom and love.
>> Correct
The disadvantage of getting older is that many illnesses occur to our body.
The disadvantage of getting older is that many illnesses occur to our body.
>> The disadvantage of getting older is that many illnesses occur in our body.
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