What does it mean when you say, \"We are the architects of our own lives\"?
학생이 쓴 원문
\"We are the architects of our own lives\"
The sentence above tells that we ourselves make our own lives.
As good architects make good buildings, so good makers of the live make good lives. As architects draw a detailed plan before construction, so we should make specific and detailed plans about our lives.
And we mustn\'t forget about architects\' deligence to monitor every process, to follow through the construction projects. Likewise we need to do our best to put our plan for our lives into practice.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Steve! ^^,)
The quote actually contradicts the idea of destiny. Destiny is the force that some people think controls what happens in the future, and which cannot be influenced by people.
However, I prefer to believe that we make our own paths and that our decisions now will surely affect our lives in the future.
Thank you so much for answering your homework. I will see you again tomorrow!^^
__Teacher Mayleen :)
The sentence above tells that we ourselves make our own lives.
>>> The sentence above tells us that we make our own lives.
>>> The sentence above tells us that we make our own lives.
>>> OR: The sentence above shows that we ourselves make our own lives.
As good architects make good buildings, so good makers of the live make good lives. As architects draw a detailed plan before construction, so we should make specific and detailed plans about our lives.
>>> As good architects create good buildings, so good life creators create good lives. As architects draw a detailed plan before construction, so we should make specific and detailed plans for our lives.
>>> As good architects create good buildings, so good life creators create good lives. As architects draw a detailed plan before construction, so we should make specific and detailed plans for our lives.
And we mustn\'t forget about architects\' deligence to monitor every process, to follow through the construction projects. Likewise we need to do our best to put our plan for our lives into practice.
>>> And we mustn\'t forget about the architects\' diligence to monitor every process and to follow through on the construction projects. Likewise, we need to do our best to put our plan for our lives into practice.
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