What does it mean when you say, \"We are the architects of our own lives\"?
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It means I can choose my life and lay out the way of life. To accomplish what I want, I have to study or work hard. I think the procedure of effort enriches life.
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\"We are the architects of our own lives.\" Every decision we make and every objective we establish helps us to conceptualize the layout of the ideal life we wish to create.
Thank you so much for finding time to accomplish your homework.
I will see you in our next class. have a good day!
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It means I can choose my life and lay out the way of life.
>>> It means I can choose my life and lay out my way of life.
To accomplish what I want, I have to study or work hard.
>>> CORRECT
I think the procedure of effort enriches life.
>>> I think the process of effort enriches life.
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