What does music mean to you?
학생이 쓴 원문
oh interesting question. umm i always said to my friends something like \"music is my life\". i\'m not a good singer but i really love to sing a song. when i\'m happy, when i\'m sad, it doesn\'t matter .you know, music comfort me always. not only me. many people healed themselves with music. i mean it always makes us comfort right? when i was young i didn\'t like singing. because i hated my voice. but after i broke up with my girlfriend or when i suffered some bad experience, Music always made me calm. that\'s the reason why i love music
강사 첨삭
Hello Robin!
Music is really a good comforter. It has a lot of types so people can enjoy it whether they are happy or sad or just for nothing. Enjoy English music so you could easily memorize patterns and expressions. ^^
~T. Maine
>>Oh, this is an interesting question.
umm i always said to my friends something like \"music is my life\".
>>I always tell my friends something like \"music is my life\".
i\'m not a good singer but i really love to sing a song. when i\'m happy, when i\'m sad, it doesn\'t matter .
>>I\'m not a good singer, but I really love to sing a song whenever I\'m happy, sad, or whatever my feeling is.
you know, music comfort me always.
>> You know music always comforts me.
not only me. many people healed themselves with music.
>> It\'s not only me but also many people who healed themselves with music.
i mean it always makes us comfort right?
>> I mean it always makes us feel comfortable.
when i was young i didn\'t like singing.
>> When I was young, I didn\'t like singing.
because i hated my voice.
>> It is because I hated my voice.
but after i broke up with my girlfriend or when i suffered some bad experience, Music always made me calm.
>> But after I had a break-up with my girlfriend or when I suffered some bad experiences, music made me feel calm.
that\'s the reason why i love music
>> That\'s the reason why I love music.
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