What does “reckoning with history” mean in the context of international adoption? How can the govern
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Reckoning with history means openly acknowledging past wrongs related to international adoption.
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For decades, many adoptions involved questionable or unethical practices such as poor record-keeping or falsified documents, birth parents being pressured or misled, or children being adopted without proper consent.
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So now, we-as one of countries which did wrong to many babies – need to accept responsibility, listening to adoptees and birth families, and understanding how these practices caused long-lasting pain and loss of identity.
>> So now, as one of the countries that wronged many babies, we need to accept responsibility, listen to adoptees and birth families, and understand how these practices caused long-lasting pain and loss of identity.
Therefore, the government make sure to investigate past practices above all, conducting thorough then-adoption agencies, orphanages, and related institutions.
>>As a result, the government should make sure to investigate past practices above all, conducting thorough then-adoption agencies, orphanages, and related institutions.
And our government needs to ensure transparency in adoption process and establish legal accountability system which can hold institutions responsible if they broke laws as for adoption.
>> Also, our government needs to ensure transparency in the adoption process and establish a legal accountability system that can hold institutions responsible if they break the laws regarding adoption.
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